Si môj tieň

25. prosince 2011 v 22:47 | Loivissa |  Poézia Loivissa
Áno, každú svoju tvorbu potrebujem najprv obkecať. Som lenivá, nechce sa mi v tejto básni hrať s rytmikou. Nie je to tak presladené ako ostatné moje veci, preto to sem dávam. Popravde, Nemunai ma nazval presladenou naivnou romantičkou, no pochopíte to? :D

Si môj tieň

Spolu so svetlom v srdci,
našla som aj tieň-
-temný pocit večne vrúci,
súkromnú čiernu sieň.

Zasiala mi ju do duše
a zlomila lýru od Erato.
Každý tvoj úsmev ma kúše,
voz popola, no pripomína zlato.

Si môj temný, verný tieň,
lákaš, vábiš, si nenápadná...
Vždy berieš mi to, čo chcem,
večne milá, dobrá, záhadná.

Nerozumiem tvojim citom,
a bojím sa vlastného strachu.
Vraj si už iba mýtom,
no stále cítim strašnú ťarchu.

No keď hry svetla v sieni
odhalia svoju pravú tvár,
zisťujem, že stojím v tvojom tieni,
preto si súčasťou mojich chmár.

Kedy to vyjde najavo?
Si démon ty? Skôr ja.
Súdim ťa, i keď nemám právo...
si môjho šťastia tieň, ktorý ma zabíja.
 

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1 Nemunai Nemunai | Web | 25. prosince 2011 v 22:58 | Reagovat

je to geniálne, Ty naivný motýľ =O

I RESPECT YOU !!!

2 Loivissa Loivissa | Web | 25. prosince 2011 v 23:06 | Reagovat

Motýľ? :D
Ale ďakujem Nai :)

3 Denika Denika | Web | 27. prosince 2011 v 22:11 | Reagovat

Nemyslím si že si presladenou romantičkou možno skôr citlivou a nežnou babou ktorá to vie vyjadriť vo veršoch. čo by sa mne nepodarilo ani za sto rokov :D
Veľmi podľa mňa vrúcna a chvíľku až chladná báseň také mám z nej pocity!
(ja viem čudné pocity, ale nezabíjajte ma za ne ďakujem :D)

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